Early on I was confident the conclusion was you were going to recover the drone. I wonder, had you not recovered it, how it would have affected the writing style prior to the conclusion.
The whole thing just reminded me of college. Get it done at any hour, this is the only thing that matters in the world, driving around for supplies, everything else can wait. Was it stressful or fun? The emotions read stressful but I feel like it would have been fun =D
This was a nail bitter.
Early on I was confident the conclusion was you were going to recover the drone. I wonder, had you not recovered it, how it would have affected the writing style prior to the conclusion.
The whole thing just reminded me of college. Get it done at any hour, this is the only thing that matters in the world, driving around for supplies, everything else can wait. Was it stressful or fun? The emotions read stressful but I feel like it would have been fun =D
“Yak shaving” comes to mind here (and I don’t say that disparagingly!)
Ridiculous adventure. And you got a tick on top of all this?!
Nice work! Drone Kites are the future. Also I think archery lessons are in order, Katniss Everdeen.